Animatic

Things to improve:

-Other music for the middle parts
-Some other food to make a fuller background, like mushrooms, tomatoes, croissants, baked beans, hash browns, asparagus trees, breakfast cereal ocean (ocean and swimming got some good comments) better sausages.
-Story not really a problem
-Lots of background work to be done
-Something scary in the water
-better island-maybe not a giant toast

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